Story by Seepytea
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CARRIE THE TAR BABY |
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Our stripgirl gets more than a feather in her cap when she fails to look where she’s going!
Story by Seepytea |
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Frame 1 Carrie is on the pavement, walking past some road works. The workers are calling to her but she has her head held high as if ignoring their attentions. |
Frame 2 We now see why they were calling to her, as she walks face first with a CLANG! into a bucket that is being hoisted up on a pulley. The workmen are all wincing at the collision. |
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Frame 3 Carrie is now sat on her backside on the pavement, her dress is up around her waist showing off stockings and suspenders, the top of her dress is coming loose to show off her bra. The bucket is wobbling and tipping black gooey stuff all over her. We can now see some writing on the bucket saying ‘roofing tar’. The workmen around her are now laughing, seeing the funny side of it. |
Frame 4 Carrie has now struggled to her feet, her dress has fallen completely to her ankles, the weight of the sticky tar has pulled her bra and knickers down. She is angry at the workmen for the mess she is in. |
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Frame 5 Carrie is now staring in horror as one workman holds a water hose, another a bar of soap, and the third a wicked looking scrubbing brush. They are smiling, obviously happy at the thought of helping her to get cleaned up. |
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Frame 6 We see Carrie running to get away, she appears to be on course for a shop doorway in which to hide. The shop sign says something like ‘purveyors of fine bed linen’. She does not see a delivery man heading for the same doorway, his arms loaded with pillows – so she is on a collision course ... |
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Frame 7 PAFF! Just a big explosion of limbs and feathers. |
Frame 8 Carrie sat on the pavement, totally covered in tar and feathers, looking either shocked or dejected, the delivery man and workmen stood around laughing. | ||
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